Saturday, 19 April 2014

Review: Nil


Nil by Lynne Matson

 
Title: Nil
Series: none
Author: Lynne Matson
 
Published: Henry Holt and Company; 2014
384 pages, kindle edition
 
Source: Gifted to me (from Sarah)
 
 Description (from Goodreads):

On the mysterious island of Nil, the rules are set. You have exactly 365 days to escape—or you die.

Seventeen-year-old Charley doesn’t know the rules. She doesn’t even know where she is. The last thing she remembers is blacking out, and when she wakes up, she’s naked in an empty rock field.

Lost and alone, Charley finds no sign of other people until she meets Thad, the gorgeous leader of a clan of teenage refugees. Soon Charley learns that leaving the island is harder than she thought . . . and so is falling in love. With Thad’s time running out, Charley realizes that she has to find a way to beat the clock, and quickly.



My Thoughts:

3 stars



Nil was a bumpy ride for me. It had plenty of ups and downs, boring flat parts and a few sudden twists and turns. One minute I would be thinking that things were looking up and then it we would hit a boring part or Charley would do something stupid or another character would die. In the end, I was rather confused by my feelings towards it. I liked it, but didn't; I hated it, but didn't. It was all rather confusing...

To start the characters were too underdeveloped. I couldn't relate to any of them because we barely knew them at all - they even admit that they don't know each other's last names after being stuck with them on a deserted island for close on a year. If the other characters don't know one another well, how are we readers supposed to be able to connect to them? During the whole book everyone is kept at this distant from the readers and they all seemed rather shallow because of it.

I also had a probably with the amount of new characters introduced and the numerous killing off of the older characters. I can appreciate death in a novel when it provides that dash of reality to a serious situation, I mean they are surviving on a deserted island so yes, people are going to die. I do understand that, but the way in which
Lynne Matson approaches these killings is with a distant and emotionless touch. When you kill off a character I want to be effected by it, I want to be saddened and distraught and that requires a special touch. Not a John Green touch, who purposely tries to manipulate your emotions, but a delicate touch that was obviously lacking in Nil.

The main plotline was also a little too dull for me. There were long parts that had me bored to tears and in the end it reminded me heavily of The Maze Runner. It annoyed me that the one character who was able to figure out the maze the gates was the newbie. Why is it that they can spot something the last what hundred or more people cannot figure out? It doesn't seem very realistic that the other characters didn't even attempt to try and figure out the pattern of gates before Charley arrived. Surely that is the first thing they would think to do?

Also, in the end did we even learn what Nil was? What created it? Was Rives theory about the solar flare correct? Why do animals come sometimes and other times people? How do the gates work "back home"? Why do they "roll" at certain places at certain times"? Why only one person/animal at a time? Is Nil on another dimension to Earth? Is it part of Earth?.... so many questions were left unanswered. I could barely follow Charley's theory but even so, I need more. For that reason alone, I am hoping for a sequel.

In the end, this wasn't the best book I have ever read and I doubt I will hastily be recommending it. However, there were parts I did enjoy and the overall premise was intriguing. With a little more time and planning, I feel like this could have been a lot better.

Oh about the instalove, instalust, insta-angst or whatever the hell you want to call it, I don't have really anything to say other than: I hate instalove with every ounce of my being. Its stupid, useless, pointless and infuriating. Please authors start paying attention and stop using it in your novels!

Review: Blue Notes


Blue Notes by Carrie Lofty

 
 
Description:
 
After being bounced from foster family to foster family, Keeley, a talented pianist, is ready to start over as a junior at Tulane. But when she plays a small concert that attracts the attention of Jude, a brooding playboy and heir to an enormous fortune in the wake of his parents’ tragic death, suddenly Keeley’s life is thrown off balance once again.

Jude is the first person to confront her about the pain behind her music, and she struggles with whether or not to let him into her life, or to keep protecting herself from the hurt that relationships have caused her in the past. But Keeley’s about to learn that the melancholy young billionaire who appears to have everything can open her eyes to exactly what she needs…


My Thoughts:

2.5 stars
Blue Notes was a hard book for me to get into. There were parts that I didn't mind and actually enjoyed, but there were a lot of moments were I wanted to throw my kindle across the room in frustration.

The characters were a big issue for me, well, namely Jude. Ah, Jude Villars: the rich, bad boy orphan with that charming, tempting smile and - drum roll, please - possessive, overbearing nature. Yep, cue the official asshole card. I really don't understand the appeal of these sorts of snarky in-your-face NA men. I cannot swoon over them when they are so rude and demanding and make me want to punch them, repeatedly, in the face.

Keeley, however, was a much better character. For once a tragic and troubled past was handled well and (I never thought I would say this!) it actually improved the plotline, adding not only a layer of drama but a deeper emotional layer of realism. I loved Keeley's feistiness and her spunk, she wasn't afraid to stick up for herself or stand up for what she thought. She was a little gullible when it came to Jude but seeing how he was the first guy she had really "dated", I guess she probably would have been a little overwhelmed with it all, given her history as well.

The plotline was a little too dull for my liking. The prologued was a terrific start but I cannot say that I wasn't a big fan of the ending. The middle was somewhat uneventful and moved a tad too slow for my liking.

Saying this, if it wasn't for Jude I would have enjoyed this a lot more. The way that it was written, especially the parts about music, were beautifully described. I wouldn't hesitate to recommend this to people more suited to the genre and who enjoy their book boyfriend, tall dark, handsome and controlling. For me, however, this wasn't to my taste.

Note: a copy was provided courtesy of Carrie Lofty in exchange for an honest review. No compensation was given or taken during this process.


*Released: 6th of May, 2014

Review: Ignite


Ignite (Midnight Fire #1) by Kaitlyn Davis

 
Title: Ignite
Series: Midnight Fire, #1
Author: Kaitlyn Davis
 
Published: Amazon Digital Services; 2011
195 pages, kindle edition
 
Source: Amazon freebie
 
 Description (from Goodreads):

With one last look, one final search of the lines of his face for some sign, Kira turned and ran away from the sound of the man she loved laughing in the face of her death.

When Kira Dawson moves to South Carolina, she meets Luke, a blond goofball who quickly becomes her best friend, and Tristan, a mysterious bad boy who sends shivers down her spine. Kira knows they're keeping secrets, but when she discovers Tristan's lust for blood and her own dormant mystical powers, Kira is forced to fight for her life and make the heartbreaking decision between the familiar comfort of friendship and the fiery passion of love.


My Thoughts:


2.5 stars

Downloading freebies off of Amazon is a bit of a gamble. You have to learn to ignore the covers and most of the descriptions because you never know what you are going to get. Sometimes you are lucky enough to score a good one such as
Play With Me or The Faerie Guardian. There are times though where you get a real dud such as Entangled... or Ignite. Honestly? If I hadn't needed this for a GR challenge I don't know if I would have bothered finishing it.

My problems with this was with Kira. She was so perfect - in the bad way. The overly prim and proper and exaggerated way. She didn't raise her voice at the people who used her and lied to her, her entire life, she spoke with overly formal language - all do nots instead of don't, even during dialogue - and how great is her boyfriend because he never crosses that line and lets her set the pace. He's just that respectful. Look, I don't mind a polite protangist in the slightest. I am not saying she has to swear all the time and have sex with her boyfriend or anything like that, but seriously? Kira was overly polite. No-one speaks that formally to their friends and family. No-one.

Beside that - which actually bothered me a lot - this book was just rather dull. It dragged on. I felt like it could have easily been culled down. The were some passages that simply went on forever, describing things that didn't have any vital relevance to the plot. Such as the part when the author explained how to surf in great detail, using up close to a full chapter on it when it had no real importance whatsoever.

The writing wasn't too great either. The dialogue was so cheesy that it was laughable. The humour wasn't in the slightest bit amusing and the way Kira's group of friends talked to each other came across as stiff and awkward.

What made this book the slightest bit enjoyable was learning about the conduits and vampires. I liked how there were different "tribes". I have never read anything quite like it before so I was intrigued. It annoyed me how Kira had to be "special" though and have powers that no-one else does or is even supposed to. Ignoring that, I liked learning about the conduits' history and their separate communities and beliefs.

Overall this was too dull and tiresome for my liking. The writing could do with some improvement. The romance wasn't anything terrific. The last 15% was the highlight with more action and suspense than the rest of the book but didn't make up for much. This just wasn't my cup of tea. I wouldn't recommend it.

Friday, 11 April 2014

Review: Machine Wars


Machine Wars by Michael Pryor

 
Title: Machine Wars
Series: none
Author: Michael Pryor
 
Published: Random House Australia; 2014
288 pages, kindle edition
 
Source: Netgalley
 
 Description (from Goodreads):

Unknown to the world, a superintelligence has emerged - and it wants to eliminate Bram Argent...

The superintelligence can control any machine connected to the net, and it uses them as its unstoppable agents to achieve its ends. And the superintelligence is paranoid. Controlling the entire world is its only way to ensure its own existence.

Bram's mother is a high-level computer scientist. She's been investigating the possibility of the emergence of a superintelligence and she has evidence. But the superintelligence has become aware of her - and decided she needs to be eliminated. Now she's in hiding.

Bram must flee and find his parents - while being hunted by every machine on the planet. His friend Stella is caught up in the pursuit and becomes a target because of their friendship. Together, they must survive in an interconnected world where any machine might instantly become a lethal predator . . .


My Thoughts:

2.5 stars

Machine Wars was an interesting and quick read that, while entertaining, was somewhat disappointing. I think I set the bar a little too high for this, seeing that I have loved
Michael Pryor's other series, The Laws of Magic which would, in fact, have to be one of my all-time elite favourite series. The characters are lovable, hilariously witty and mysteriously charming; the plotline is always baffling in the best sort of way, keeping my on my toes, bewildering me but loving every possible second; and the vibe of the steampunk society that Aubrey lives within is one of my favourite settings in all the series I have read. With all this in mind, I have to admit that I expected that level of wonder in Machine Wars as well.

However, I didn't realise that this was a middle grade book, and while I normally do not shy away from those sorts of books, I struggled to appreciate the overall simplicity of this. The plot could have been so much more involving if the battle scenes been more drawn out, if the good guys hadn't won so easily and if the junkbots and killbots had actually been scary.

The characters were a little too immature for my liking and the protagonist a little too, well, wussy and pathetic really. He cried a little too much and almost vomited at the sight of his barely nicked ear - I prefer my MCs with a little more kick and oomph, sorry. Bob was a great comic relief however and I enjoyed his witty remarks.

What let this down most of all was the lack of development in the actual artificial intelligence apocalypse that had sent our characters into the predicaments they were in. I understand that the targeted audience would be a little below understanding the actual technicalities of it. Hell, I am below understanding it all but I would have appreciated more profound effort attempting to explain it more than Bob's scuba diving metaphor.

Overall, I enjoyed the premise of this book but found that the age barrier significantly effected me from being able to relate to both the characters (even though they are only a year or two younger than me) and lowered by tolerance for the simplicity of plotline and its resolutions. If you are looking into
Michael Pryor, I would strongly recommend trying out Blaze of Glory instead.

Note: a copy was provided courtesy of Michael Pryor and Random House Australia, through Netgalley, in exchange for an honest review. No compensation was given or taken during this process.

Tuesday, 8 April 2014

Review: The Geography of Me and You


The Geography of Me and You by Jennifer E. Smith

 
Title: The Geography of Me and You
Series: none
Author: Jennifer E. Smith
 
Published: Hachette Australia; 2014
352 pages, kindle edition
 
Source: Netgalley
 
 Description (from Goodreads):

Lucy and Owen meet somewhere between the tenth and eleventh floors of a New York City apartment building, on an elevator rendered useless by a citywide blackout. After they're rescued, they spend a single night together, wandering the darkened streets and marveling at the rare appearance of stars above Manhattan. But once the power is restored, so is reality. Lucy soon moves to Edinburgh with her parents, while Owen heads out west with his father.

Lucy and Owen's relationship plays out across the globe as they stay in touch through postcards, occasional e-mails, and -- finally -- a reunion in the city where they first met.


My Thoughts:
 
This book started perfectly. It drew you into the world of the protagonists quickly and easily, it had me captured and on the edge of my seat. It whispered promises, promises of a great romance, cute chemistry, witty conversations, everything and more I had come to love, and expect, of Jennifer E. Smith.

However, it lied.

It started well, by half way I was captured by the sheer adorableness of Lucy and Owen. I loved how they accepted that spending a single night walking the streets, starring at the stars and talking, didn't mean they really knew each other - and certainly didn't mean that something was meant to happen between them. Finally we have some protagonist with a bit of brains, smart enough to deal with their hormones and seek friendship first, over lust. I could have sung with the joy of the reasonableness of these characters!

After this however everything began to go downhill...

Everything began to plod along after the firs half, taking no real direction, doing nothing in particular, giving us nothing to go on. I was bored. The characters travelled the world. They complained about stuff. They sent a postcard or an email and then complained some more. Nothing else happened.

The writing was also lacking. Normally I love
Jennifer E. Smith's work because of her humorous dialogue and witty style but this was a flop. It was tired and dull, lacking her usual bubbliness, her spark, that little something extra that makes me fall in love every time I read about her characters. The passing of time was also written very poorly. Two paragraphs could be spaced six weeks apart - but that wouldn't be indicated until half way through the chapter and by then I was simply confused.

Overall while The Geography of You and Me wasn't what I was expecting, it was a cute and light-hearted read. It took me no time to fly through and I am glad to have read it, despite the lack of connection I felt to this couple. I will still eagerly await
Jennifer E. Smith's other works but I wouldn't hastily recommend this one. Not one of her best works.

Note:a copy was provided courtesy of Jennifer E. Smith and Hachette Australia, through Netgalley, in exchange for an honest review. No compensation was given or taken during this process.

Monday, 7 April 2014

Review: Thief


Thief (The Scarab Beetle #1) by C. L. Stone
 
Title: Thief
Series: The Scarab Beetle, #1
Author: C. L. Stone
 
Published: Arcato Publishing; 2011
420 pages, kindle edition
 
Source: Netgalley
 
 Description (from Goodreads):

Kayli Winchester is a dirt-poor girl living out of a hotel, forced to be the parent for a drunken father and teenage brother who she’s desperate to keep in school. The only way she scrapes by is to utilize her one skill: pickpocketing. But even though she’s a thief she has a moral code: no kids or old ladies, only targets who can defend themselves. Not that they see her coming…

Thinking she’s been working under the radar, Kayli has no idea The Academy has been watching and taking notice. Now a team that needs her skill has offered her a way out of her predicament and it’s her last chance: work with them, or face jail time. Kayli resists at first, but slowly the boys reveal they can be trusted. With Marc, the straight man, Raven, the bad-boy Russian, Corey and Brandon the twins as different as night and day, and Axel their stoic leader, there’s a lot Kayli can learn from these Academy guys about living on the edge of the law. If only she can stay on the good side instead of the bad.

Especially when the job they offer her is more than any of them bargained for. After it’s done, the hunters have become the hunted and their target is now after Kayli. The Academy boys do their best to keep her hidden, but a thief like Kayli will never sit still for long.


My Thoughts:

 1.5 stars

Where to start...?



Maybe I should start with how annoying the protagonist was? Or maybe I should touch base with the numerous clichés in this? Oh, how about I talk about the yawn-inducing [lack-of] plot? Whatever I chose to stay, there is one thing that I need to pinpoint clearly: this was bloody rubbish.

I don't know why I went into this expecting something fun, something light and fluffy - reminiscent of Heist Society and Alex Rider. This was anything but. Filled with nothing but cliché after cliché and a MC that made me want to strangle myself, I really don't why I bothered with this.



Kayli is a pickpocket. She is kidnapped by a bunch of normal guys amazingly sexy and to-die-for, oh-so-hot blokes looking to recruit her as an asset for a important job of theirs... this was where I began to stop paying attention. From here, Kayli makes stupid decision after stupid decision, only stopping to flirt with every breathing male in sight.

Why is it that all characters have to be so damn good-looking in the new adult genre? I don't see the appeal. How many times do us readers need to stress to authors that these characters don't work, that no one wants to read about another perfect protagonist? Its annoying and makes all the characters seems so superficial. Sigh. I am just not in the mood to go on this rant today... please just hurry up and get the message people.

Moving on to the romance. I can deal with love triangles. Yes, I know that most people cannot stand them but I have read so many that I am over ranting about them. This however went far beyond a mere love triangle, or even a love square. Kayli began acting like best buddies with her captors within the first hour of her kidnapping and constantly flirted with them, constantly - even the gay ones. She couldn't seem to help herself. Its so freakin' ridiculous! I have never read a book where the main characters kisses so many different guys - first there was Marc, then there was Raven, then Brandon, then Blake and then we were back to Marc again. You need to get it together Kayli and choose one of them. On top of that (yes, it gets worse!) she shares a bed with every single one of them. Every. Freakin'. Single. One.



To make it even worse, the plot was a drag. Nothing happened. It was dull, I was bored. The mystery that made this a "spy thriller" was so bloody stupid I could laugh at the absurdity of it all. Its was so pathetic, so lame, so plain old dull.

This ended up being the worst espionage book I have ever read. I doubt I'll read further into the series, even if this book stopped in the middle of a chapter and I want to know how it turns out. This was not good and I certainly wouldn't recommend it.


Note: a copy was provided courtesy of C. L. Stone and Arcato Publishing, through Netgalley, in exchange for an honest review. No compensation was given or taken during this process.

Tuesday, 1 April 2014

Review: Brave

Brave by Zoe Dawson
 
 
Description:
 
In the season of hope, in the season of giving… how far would you go for your friend?

Alissa Thompson has been the good girl her whole life. Her uninterested parents don’t understand her hopes and dreams. But this Christmas when her steadfast childhood friend Charlie needs her more than ever, she can’t back down. Crossing the line means being braver than she has ever been in her life. It means changing and growing and taking a stand.

Dakota Gray was brave in the face of debilitating fear. But he lost himself in that blood soaked day and has shunned everything he once knew. Now shattered and broken, he hides out in isolation, his wounds beyond healing. His heart closed, his emotions buried, he’s a man on the edge of self-destructing. Little does he know that courage would be found in another searching for the strength to be brave.

Now snowbound in the Colorado Rockies one week before Christmas, Alissa thought this was about her journey and her friend, about setting him free. But from the moment she meets Dakota, she learns about what real bravery is all about. What real love is all about. But is the season enough, her courage enough, her love enough to heal this hero’s brave heart and in the end set herself free?


My Thoughts:
 
1.5 stars.

At this rate I don't think I am ever going to be able to find a New Adult book that I can simply sit down and enjoy. Something cute and light without all this ridiculous clichés - the perfect and flawless beauty of the protagonists, the "tortured" hero thing, the inta-love insta-lust, the lame "coincidental" meetings between the main characters... I think you get the point. None of these things work, so why do authors continue to use them is beside me. I don't understand the hype behind these sorts of books.

Where to start with
Brave? There are so many cringe-worthy parts I cannot even decide what to rant about first. How about I make a list? That sounds good, I like lists.

1) The introduction and insta-lust - I don't how many times I have said this, but it obviously needs to be said again, because authors aren't listening: instalove doesn't work.Its a pretty simple message when you think about it, but over and over again our protagonists are falling "in love" within a couple of days, weeks if we are lucky. Everyone out here in the real world knows that it doesn't work like that. I mean, sure, it would be nice to meet a hot guy somewhere and be head-over-heels in love with them the same day, but we all that doesn't happen. Why then do our characters?

Our protagonists in
Brave, Dakota and Alissa, met at Dakota's family hidden cabin in the Colorado mountains during a blizzard. Alissa falls down a cliff-face and Dakota treks through the snow to save her... shirtless. Yes, shirtless. It was snowing and he was outside without a shirt chopping up firewood. Maybe my limited experience with snow (and by that I mean I haven't never experienced snow) limits me but I am pretty sure that you rug up in snowy weather, certainly not walk around half-naked. This is where my interest began to lag. Cue the insta-lust.

From there it was an avalanche - he carries her back to the cabin and they find themselves snowed in for the next few days. Alissa's ankle was sprained during her accident, so Dakota (being an ex-nurse) has to carry her everywhere. Its ridiculous! Everyone who has sprained their ankle before knows that sure, it hurts, but after about ten minutes of icing it you can walk about, with a limp yes but there is certainly no need to be carried everywhere.

Now, the first thing Alissa notices is how hot Dakota is and we are then forced to listen to her drone about his great physique:

"He had a powerful chest that tapered down to a lean waist and amazing washboards like I have never seen in real life. His biceps bulged with a glorious curve of muscle that literally made my mouth water."

"Thick midnight black hair was brushed back off his forehead, tapering down the side of his strong neck, just brushing the heavy muscles of his shoulders."

"His muscles were hard, and I caressed the heavy ones on his arms and his wide chest."


... yeah, we get it. He's hot. He's got abs. Get over it. No need to tell us over and over and over and over again.

2) Romanticised Illness - This is what niggled at me most of all. I absolutely despise how authors dare to use mental illness as a something sexy and hot about their character or to add to the whole "tortured", broody guy thing. PTS isn't something to joke around with, it isn't something to throw at a character so they can play knight-in-shining-armour or damsel-in-distress. It a very serious illness that needs to be given a certain respect.

If a topic like this is approached, it needs to be done well. This wasn't. Dakota didn't very realistic and if he said the word "demons" one more time in such an offhanded, casual way I was seriously going to have to punch something. I know people that struggled through depression, I know people that have cut and I know people that are overcoming it. This isn't how they talk, this isn't how they feel. It so much more painful than
Zoe Dawson makes it out to be. This isn't a game or a story, this is real and it needs respect.

3) The characters - the characters themselves were irritable to say the least. Alissa was intolerable. She was stupid, controlling, insensitive and just gahhhhh! She was also a bit gullible. She actually said I trust you to Dakota not even a few hours after meeting him - he could be a serial killer or rapist for all she knows! Then she begins to boss Dakota around like she is a slave master and makes him do all her bidding. She is also way too nosy to be polite. Its his land that she was trespassing on which doesn't mean that he "has to" answer all her nosy questions though she tells him it does.

4) The writing - I found the writing rather repetitive. The same things were described over and over again, using the same adjectives as well. This did nothing but add to my lack of enthusiasm to get into it.

5) The ending - I cannot so much without spoilers but the ending was just stupid. I actually laughed out loud when I read it. It all happened a little too quickly for my liking.

In the end, there isn't much positive to say about this at all, other than I am really disappointed, especially after reading the author's
A Perfect Mess. I was expecting something a little more but I didn't get that.

Note: a copy was provided courtesy of Zoe Dawson and Toot Suite, through Netgalley, in exchange for an honest review. No compensation was given or taken during this process.